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\u05d1\u05d7\u05d5\u05e8\u05d4 \u05e2\u05dd \u05d2\u05d5\u05e3 \u05dc\u05d5\u05d4\u05d8 \u05d1\u05d7\u05d9\u05e4\u05d4 \u05d5\u05e2\u05d5\u05d3 \u05de\u05dc\u05d0 \u05de\u05d5\u05d3\u05e2\u05d5\u05ea \u05e9\u05dc \u05e0\u05e2\u05e8\u05d5\u05ea \u05dc\u05d9\u05d5\u05d5\u05d9 ...Camper and Brown checked out each other. Advisers were supposed to be present in any respect staff conferences. Phoy blocked the best way as they moved for the door. The Americans knew arguing was futile. The bombardment ceased at noon. This left the South Vietnamese to surprise what can be subsequent. At 2:00 PM Colonel Dinh emerged from the command bunker and strolled over to see Camper and Brown. The advisors saw him coming and went out to greet him. The 2 Americans saluted. Dinh said, gazing down at his ft. No one will combat. I shot one man to persuade the others to fight, however they will not. I have been in contact with the National Liberation Front Forces and they have promised to deal with my males well. That is the only method to prevent extra death." Then Dinh requested, "Do you wish to surrender with us? Colonel, we want you luck," Camper stated as he prepared to go away. "Major Brown and I will take care of ourselves from this moment on. We are able to now not advise you, and you not have any duty to us. I’m not involved about General Giai.

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